Important and need to set up experiment for the research.

It is the research proposal for my FYP.
I want a detail plan of the dissertation, so that I can do the research paper (appr. 9000 words).
Therefore, this proposal is important and need to set up experiment for the research.

Important and need to set up experiment for the research.

In the “work” file, it is some of my idea but it is not enough for a dissertation paper yet.

So please help me modify it or come up with another proposal.