Use effect incorrectly in relation to your design and you do not address central ethical issues at all.

I need from you to please look at the professor comments and follow EXACTLY what he expects in this paper. Here is his comments:

(What I wrote was: Needs detail in several areas ethics included, plus confusion about qual (qualitative) and action research . Work on these areas as you revise. Show that you understand these areas. For example, on page 1, you use effect incorrectly in relation to your design and you do not address central ethical issues at all. On page 2, what you wrote about action research is confusing and doesn’t reflect what the approach is about. While I didnt comment, your section on data analysis is incomplete (lacks specific statistics you would use to analyze the survey data). Rework and turn back in.)
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Added on 19.11.2015 16:00
Please read carefully what i write her because I already failed the test and I am given another attempt. I need from you to please look at the professor comments and follow EXACTLY what he expects in this paper. Here is his comments:

(What I wrote was: Needs detail in several areas ethics included, plus confusion about qual (qualitative) and action research . Work on these areas as you revise. Show that you understand these areas. For example, on page 1, you use effect incorrectly in relation to your design and you do not address central ethical issues at all. On page 2, what you wrote about action research is confusing and doesnt reflect what the approach is about. While I didnt comment, your section on data analysis is incomplete (lacks specific statistics you would use to analyze the survey data). Rework and turn back in.)

you need to make edits on this paper OR if you prefer to restart it all over again thats fine too, OR select one of these optional questions and write two pages about it . The other two questions will be in attachment too (just choose one if you decide not to edit or rewrite the first question).